Does this work?

[klovibond]

This is a causeway across the Lily Ponds at Bosherston, Pembrokeshire taken in the Autumn with a Nikon P510 bridge camera. I'm in 2 minds about it....and have been considering re-visiting with my DSLR set-up and big-stopper to try a long exposure

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[mknittle]

I like it Kevin, the warm colors look inviting.

[Geoff F]

The causeway is at a bit of an angle and there is good perspective so it is working fairly well. But I would clone out those leaves in the top right corner.

[Shadowman]

I don't know if a longer exposure will help but definitely try from another angle. Nice image.

[chauncey]

The colors help make the image, regardless. when you reshoot, work the scene/different perspectives and angles.