OK, hot drink in hand, I'll give it a go; a one liner on each.
1: I like the shot, the different levels, etc., if there is one thing that spoils it for me, it is the pole dividing the shot in two, now I appreciate it would be impossible to take a shot without it there, but under 'artistic licence', I wonder how you'd feel about cloning it out?
2: Lovely colours, but that horizon needs to be level
3: Another one I like; because I shoot heron when I can, but in a river setting rather than beach, I can't suggest much other than comment it might be a tad over exposed (and I have plenty of my own shots to prove how easy that is)
4: Slight level issue, but my eye is drawn to the white object in foreground, if litter, suggest clone it out? (or pick it up before taking the shot)
5: The bright area lower right needs a significant decrease in exposure in Post Processing, I'd also (personally) pan left a tad too
6: Is the kind of shot that makes an impression at the time (for you) but rarely translates well into a photograph unless the foreground scene really complements the sky (as it did in 2)
7: Is this a candid shot of someone unknown to you? It shouldn't work, but as she's looking at us, it does, I might suggest cloning out the yellow line on the tarmac below to simplify the composition
8: I kinda like the compositional elements brought by the arrangement of fallen trees, but the scene doesn't hold my attention, it may if given a bit more punch in Post Processing with a technique like
Local Contrast Enhancement (LCE)
9: As 8 above, but also I feel I want to see more (i.e. a wider angle)
10: Perhaps shot from a bit too close? The diagonals of the pylon tower I suspect you are under don't help.
11: What is the subject? The foreground (sharp, but dark) branch, or the overall scene (which the branch obscures just a bit too much of for my taste)
12: Daughter or Grand-daughter? either way, she's not enjoying being your model, but if a family snap, may well have value in years to come! You should consider what is in the background though, there are some bold shapes and colours that attract our eyes away from the subject.
13: Much like 6, this is the kind of subject that makes an impression on the photographer, but is difficult to pull of as a still (and silent) image, again this would benefit from
Local Contrast Enhancement (LCE)
I seem to have given you lots to think about there and most of it was negative (sorry), what I will say is that I do completely understand why you took each shot and hope my ideas hlp make future captures or post processing better.
Most have good exposure and focus choice, so well done.