I've got a lot of BIF images that I'll occasionally insert to other images...none on a wire.
I like the background, I like the way the wires cut through the image on an angle and I even like the randomness of where the birds are. The thing that bothers me is the birds are not sharp nor clearly lit. Not sure if it would look better if the birds were more silhouetted, or perhaps the image just more tightly cropped.
I like experimenting with photos which have wires in them, but I'm not sure this one works though don't really know why.