Originally Posted by
Dave Humphries
Hi Peter,
That certainly looks good.
The only issue I see, and it may have been deliberate, is that focus appears to be on the 'tip' closest to the camera, thus 'wasting' the DoF in front of that on fresh air, but if you didn't want it sharper near the back, then that's fine. The sharpness actually competes with the grain, hence my thought it might have been intentional.
I should also point out I have no idea what Karl Blossefeldt's style is like, I am just commenting as I see it.
Hope that's ok,