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Originally Posted by
Dave Humphries
Hi Thierry,
I agree with the second version.
I think, if mine, I'd tone down the bird motif thing, assuming we don't want to remove it.
Other than that, I have little to suggest, as usual, your timing, focusing, control of depth of field, exposure and tonal range are an example to us all.
... and the little? (I had to suggest)
Well, the fast shutter speed has frozen all the rain to tiny pin pricks of light whereas streaks would look better, being more obviously rain.
I'm not sure what you can do about it now though - if they were not quite so bright, or could be smeared in PP?
I don't know - it could ruin a good picture if it doesn't work well.
Not sure that helps much,