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21st May 2016, 09:22 PM
#1
Peacock
Birds are not my usual subject, unless they make a part of a larger image, but while out with the family today we saw a displaying peacock. I didn't get a decent shot of the full tail as the background was very distracting, but I picked up the two below. I like the depth given by the shallow-ish depth of field, but I know many would have stopped down.
Comments welcome of course.
1. Proud display

2. Feather detail - focus is in the bottom left corner. I'm not sure if this works.
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22nd May 2016, 01:34 AM
#2
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22nd May 2016, 01:41 AM
#3
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22nd May 2016, 02:42 AM
#4
Re: Peacock
Actually IMO this sort of shots of peacocks are superior to those displaying the entire fan. However, on the second shot a wider DOF would have worked better.
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22nd May 2016, 06:11 PM
#5
Re: Peacock
I agree, a narrower aperture for the second shot or crop tighter; maybe square or 4 x 5 ratio?. The bulk of the larger colour whorls are seriously out of focus which I find distracting.
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22nd May 2016, 07:19 PM
#6
Re: Peacock
Yeah, I agree Geoff and Dan - number 2 isn't working. Had it demonstrated a big change in depth of field it may have worked better, but even then it needed a more central focal point. I'm pleased with the first though. Thanks for the comments everyone.
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22nd May 2016, 08:09 PM
#7
Moderator
Re: Peacock
#1 is very good - and very sharp where it matters; great capture.
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23rd May 2016, 09:24 AM
#8
Re: Peacock
and...good angle too...Good job on #1.
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23rd May 2016, 10:03 AM
#9
Re: Peacock
No 1 certainly works well, it really helps in separating the birds head.
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23rd May 2016, 07:07 PM
#10
Re: Peacock
I really like #1,the image has a painterly look
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