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Thread: Evening Glow
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7th September 2015, 04:21 PM #1
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Evening Glow
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7th September 2015, 07:32 PM #2
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Re: Evening Glow
OK, but do you need all that dark foreground sand?
Maybe a very slight crop from the bottom and left side? Or even go square?
And I would remove that little spot in the water above the bow.
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7th September 2015, 07:40 PM #3
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Re: Evening Glow
Nicely exposed sky and water.
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7th September 2015, 08:01 PM #4
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Re: Evening Glow
Randall, I'd go with Geoff's comments.
This is a really nice capture but i think less is more might work better and give it more impact/wow factor.
I would crop about half the beach area about as far as the sticks/driftwood. Geoff favours the sqare crop, bur I think I would make more of a feature of the vertical element in the cloud so would crop from the left inwards towards the centre about a third.
More importantly, I would check the levels of magenta since there seems to be sharpening or vibrance artefacts running across the image where the sky shifts from orange through to evening blue.
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9th September 2015, 06:51 AM #5
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Re: Evening Glow
+1 to Geoff's comments...
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