Page 1 of 3 123 LastLast
Results 1 to 20 of 43

Thread: B&W

  1. #1

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    B&W

    C&C appreciated

    B&W

  2. #2

    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    northern Virginia suburb of Washington, DC
    Posts
    19,064

    Re: B&W

    Gorgeous composition and toning!

    The only characteristic I don't like is the bright tones immediately behind and around the trees. Whether that was introduced during post-processing or happened naturally (which I doubt), the look for me is a heavy-handed spotlight when the nice separation of the trees from the background requires no spotlight.

  3. #3
    Moderator Donald's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Glenfarg, Scotland
    Posts
    21,402
    Real Name
    Just add 'MacKenzie'

    Re: B&W

    I love the composition. However, I am seeing a lot of 'ghosting' around the trees.

    EDIT - I see Mike has just said the same thing.

  4. #4

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Thank you so much for looking and commenting Mike and Donald , it is nice to hear pleasing comments from two B&W masters

    The bright tones behind the trees come from the PP work, I think it happened when I increased the contrast. I actually liked the effect but because you don't find it appealing I will try and see what I can do about it. If I can manage to get a better look with PP , I might post it tomorrow. I bought a motorbike last week to go to the countryside to take better landscape photos because my small scooter wasn't enough for that. So, I'm very excited about it and I'm trying to get used to riding it, that's why I can't concentrate on my PP work properly but I will spend some time on this image to get rid of the ghosting.

  5. #5

    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    northern Virginia suburb of Washington, DC
    Posts
    19,064

    Re: B&W

    Just remember that it's not safe to take selfies while riding your new motorbike!

  6. #6
    Moderator Donald's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Glenfarg, Scotland
    Posts
    21,402
    Real Name
    Just add 'MacKenzie'

    Re: B&W

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    I actually liked the effect but because you don't find it appealing I will try and see what I can do about it.
    It can give quite an interesting effect. But it so obviously an artefact of post-processing that when you see it you know it's wrong and shouldn't be there.

    Take care on that 'toy' of yours ... and have lots of fun.

  7. #7
    deetheturk's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2013
    Location
    Kemer, Fethiye, Turkey
    Posts
    4,981
    Real Name
    David

    Re: B&W

    Nice capture Binnur, I agree though with Mike and Donald's comments, I'm sure you will fix it

    What bike did you buy? and as the guys said be extra careful

  8. #8

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Don't worry Mike , no way !




    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    Just remember that it's not safe to take selfies while riding your new motorbike!

  9. #9

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Thanks for your nice wishes Donald

    Quote Originally Posted by Donald View Post
    It can give quite an interesting effect. But it so obviously an artefact of post-processing that when you see it you know it's wrong and shouldn't be there.

    Take care on that 'toy' of yours ... and have lots of fun.

  10. #10

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Thank you David, I'm glad that you liked the image

    I bought a Pulsar 200NS, it is powerful enough to get to even Fethiye and Marmaris but my brother who lives partially in Marmaris doesn't know about it yet. If I can get experienced enough to ride on it for long hours, I will visit him with my bike and he will have found out Thanks for your advice about being extra carefull, I certainly will. Here is the link for the bike


    https://www.google.com.tr/search?q=p...BoQsAQ&dpr=0.9



    Quote Originally Posted by deetheturk View Post
    Nice capture Binnur, I agree though with Mike and Donald's comments, I'm sure you will fix it

    What bike did you buy? and as the guys said be extra careful

  11. #11
    deetheturk's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2013
    Location
    Kemer, Fethiye, Turkey
    Posts
    4,981
    Real Name
    David

    Re: B&W

    It certainly looks the part Binnur

  12. #12

    Re: B&W

    Binnur, I think the shot has great potential, maybe a bit off the top but that's totally personal. I have to agree about the halo around the trees, not working for me either.
    As a fireman I do some things that many people might think crazy, but you'd never get me on anything less than 4 wheels. Be safe on that thing.

  13. #13
    Daisy Mae's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2011
    Location
    Wick, Caithness, Scotland.
    Posts
    2,609
    Real Name
    Sharon

    Re: B&W

    I agree with Mike and Donald's point.. although it does not offend my eye so much.

    Wonderfully captivating light and tone which is almost opalescent. That's a sky to die for ..and the trees are beautifully composed and shot.. Yes...you 'could' lose a bit of the top ..but pesonally I rather like the perspective it brings to the shot.

    I love it.

  14. #14

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Thanks for looking and commenting Jack I have fixed the halo but I want to upload it tomorrow because it is getting dark here in Turkey now and because the lights at home might mislead me, it is better to wait till tomorrow for a final check. The halo was caused by the soft contrast slider in SEP2. IMO the sky adds to the composition , that's why I left it as is.

    When riding my motorbike I put on special clothes for protection and I feel like Robocop I think (and I hope) those clothes are safe enough. But being careful is the best protection anyway


    Quote Originally Posted by flashback View Post
    Binnur, I think the shot has great potential, maybe a bit off the top but that's totally personal. I have to agree about the halo around the trees, not working for me either.
    As a fireman I do some things that many people might think crazy, but you'd never get me on anything less than 4 wheels. Be safe on that thing.

  15. #15
    DanK's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Location
    New England
    Posts
    9,059
    Real Name
    Dan

    Re: B&W

    I agree with the others--a very striking image, but the ghosting distracts from it.

  16. #16

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Thank you for looking and commenting Sharon, I'm glad that you liked the image IMO the sky adds to the composition and that's why I left it as is. For the halo, it didn't seem bad to me before Mike and Donald's comments but it is good that I learnt something new about PP artefacts. I will be more careful with the soft contrast slider in SEP2 next time. I will upload an edit without the halo tomorrow.

  17. #17

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Thanks a lot Dan Tomorrow I'm uploading an edit without the ghosting to make you all happy



    Quote Originally Posted by DanK View Post
    I agree with the others--a very striking image, but the ghosting distracts from it.

  18. #18
    Shadowman's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    WNY
    Posts
    36,716
    Real Name
    John

    Re: B&W

    Nicely done, I like how the halo lifts the trees from the screen, but the effect can be minimized somewhat.

  19. #19

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Turkey
    Posts
    12,779
    Real Name
    Binnur

    Re: B&W

    Thanks John Yes I will lessen the effect. More experienced eyes saw the artefact immediately although I didn't even know it was a PP artefact. Good learning practise for me

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely done, I like how the halo lifts the trees from the screen, but the effect can be minimized somewhat.

  20. #20

    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    northern Virginia suburb of Washington, DC
    Posts
    19,064

    Re: B&W

    It doesn't seem to me to be an artifact. Instead, it seems to be a choice.

Page 1 of 3 123 LastLast

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •