
Originally Posted by
Geoff F
You have asked for feedback, Jim, so being totally honest; if I had taken this shot I would ditch it.
There is too much dark out of focus area in the bottom right corner which is overwhelming the main subjects. Maybe try a crop from the bottom and right side to reduce this problem; but the stems are already looking rather short so be careful with any crop.
If the bottom right corner was well focused this scene would have worked for me, although I would probably have still cropped out that part of a flower on the right side.