Frank,
That's certainly cured it, well spotted.
Grahame
I have Colin, but I'll need to find a different airport as locations at CLT where you can shoot from are very limited and daylight hours only.
I love your airport shots and recall a special one you did with light trails at night leading right to a sharp image of the aircraft still in flight. These are great but that one was absolutely awesome!
I have; it looks good.
Really not sure what you're trying to achieve with your version (and others have alluded to this also), but it's a significant degradation of the original work. Are you trying for some kind of artistic interpretation?
I think perhaps you need to take a really close look at your version; perhaps you just uploaded the wrong one?