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    It's not 14th Feb

    C & C is welcome, especially in my conversion. It has always been touch and go with my monochromes and not forgetting anything to add to give it the wow factor.

    Thanks

    It's not 14th Feb
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    Re: It's not 14th Feb

    Personally, Steven, I would crop tighter.

    If the sign, in the top left corner was clear, and obviously meant something to the scene I would leave it alone. Otherwise, I would prefer to concentrate more on the main action; which would probably mean cropping just above the Chocolate sign in the background.

    However, this might mean doing a square crop.

    The actual conversion to monochrome looks ideal to me.

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    Re: It's not 14th Feb

    Geoff, thanks for the comments.

    I left the sign there as it was in the airport and I was thinking of using that to tell the story of a guy who is going away and the last moment asking for her hand or something like that. Maybe the title is all wrong.

    ah, I don't know ... anyway thanks for the comment on the conversion.

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