Nicely done, especially sharp around the feet. Were you focusing on the reflection?
I'll say it like I see it, but I accept you'll not agree with me on one point
The name/copyright and over exposure detract more for me than the things you mention Chris.
You only just missed the full reflection, and I know from experience, that changes within tenths of a second with each ripple and is hard to predict.
So little of the tail is missing, it doesn't really impact too much, possibly the thin white border helps this.
HTH,