Columns (6-16-12)

[Digital]

Would very much welcome C&C. Bruce




#2 Cropped out what was in the left upper side of photo #1

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Bruce,

Any interesting composition, but there are a few things that strike me about the presentation here.

a) There's something white creeping into the top left corner that could be removed
b) The histogram shows the black point needs raising a little
c) there's something odd about the brickwork in the columns - at the top, under the roof, they have good contrast, but seem misty/low contrast over the bulk of their height, not sure if that's lens flare or something applied in PP with too wide and soft a brush that has bled over

Hope that helps,

[Digital]

Hi Bruce,

Any interesting composition, but there are a few things that strike me about the presentation here.

a) There's something white creeping into the top left corner that could be removed
b) The histogram shows the black point needs raising a little
c) there's something odd about the brickwork in the columns - at the top, under the roof, they have good contrast, but seem misty/low contrast over the bulk of their height, not sure if that's lens flare or something applied in PP with too wide and soft a brush that has bled over

Hope that helps,

Dave, I cropped out the object in photo #2. I can raise the blacks in LR; however I am confused about C. Bruce



I raised the blacks a little. Bruce