Silhouettes in a Window (Warning - Boudoir style photograph)

[Goldcoastgolfer]

It took me a while but here's the updated version:



Vignetting changed, a couple of window marks subtly updated, some of the hotspots toned down to the best of my ability. I had a look at removing the window sill but that left the reflection of a hand without any context which looked weird and I didn't want to change the aspect ratio so I've left it in.

While i have your attention here, I thought I'd get some feedback on the second in the series (although it was probably the first one i originally posted). It's had a few subtle edits since it was originally posted.

[kezmal]

The edit on the first looks really good now. My eye isnt drawn to the bright spots on the chest. Now for the second shot, couldnt you have taken a few pounds of the subject? Oh and a tan, she's a bit lily white Standing there like a beacon in the night. Okay seriously now - I think the white marks on the window over my face are little distracting and I'm wondering if perhaps cropping higher to above the underwear may be better?

[retiredPhil]

As a person who is always learning, I was wondering if this is more of a profile than a silhouette? The definition I use for a silhouette would have the subject be one color, usually black, and no interior features, only an outline; and the background would be monochrome also, usually white.

I really liked the second photo because of the reflection.

[Shadowman]

Latest version adds more mystic, more story telling.