A little over a month ago, one of my first threads was about defining the subject in landscapes. I got some very helpful and thoughtful responses. The thread is HERE.
Today, I was able to go back to the location of one of my original photos and try to improve the composition. The first shot below is the original. The second is the retake. What do you think? It's definitely a better time of year as it's much greener now than it was then.