Again, I have not resized these files yet. I will get in the habbit at some point.
Nikon 105 2.5 manual focus
D90
ISO 200
1/2000
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22nd April 2011, 11:57 AM #1
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almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
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22nd April 2011, 12:04 PM #2
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
Much better, John. Good pose on her and nice composition. A little white balance adjustment, maybe?
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22nd April 2011, 12:30 PM #3
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
Jiro,you think still warmer?
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22nd April 2011, 12:32 PM #4
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
Not really, I was just basing my subjective comment on the white line on the pavement.
Originally Posted by jconti3
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22nd April 2011, 12:37 PM #5
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
Some aggressive cropping is required here. She is one of the several focal points in this picture, where as she is (or not?) the only intended focal point.
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22nd April 2011, 01:15 PM #6
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
Not sure about the white balance. I guess I dont know how to control it in the GIMP. How do we like the crop?
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22nd April 2011, 01:21 PM #7
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
You cropped it just right! Originally Posted by jconti3
Not sure about the white balance. I guess I dont know how to control it in the GIMP. How do we like the crop?
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22nd April 2011, 03:59 PM #8
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
I hope you don't mind me editing this image?
I haven't done cloning that extreme ever, But I guess it makes a big difference here.
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22nd April 2011, 05:20 PM #9
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
WOW, not was I going for at all. I like the contrast of the thin metal frames and the soft woman. Also, I was trying to over use the rule of thirds through out the frame. Thanks for taking an intrest in the image. What program did you use for the cloning?
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22nd April 2011, 06:06 PM #10
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Re: almost the shot I was going for. Lots of 1/3's...... C&C
Never be afraid to break the rules, brother
I used Photoshot CS5.
Just noticed, cropping out the negative space from right above her head would make it more appealing...
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