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Thread: More practice
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17th February 2011, 07:04 PM #1
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More practice
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17th February 2011, 07:19 PM #2
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Re: More practice
That swan is still a bit soft. Getting a good focus on a scene like this is never easy.
I think I would crop 'Posted' a bit tighter on the left side. Possibly change the size ratio to 5 x 4 ratio
The river scene is excellent.
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17th February 2011, 07:24 PM #3
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Re: More practice
That was the same swan-wrong picture- i replaced it with the correct one
sorry
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17th February 2011, 07:28 PM #4
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Re: More practice
I like these three. Is the River Factory straight?
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17th February 2011, 07:31 PM #5
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Re: More practice
That is a lot better, Gerald. The flag shot is also good.
Possibly a very slight anti clockwise rotation for the river building; but it is very slight.
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