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    The flight

    It was at sunset in January, this Year

    The flight

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    You have a beautiful capture of the duck flying into the early, or late, light. I am not sure that you need all that water behind it. It would also be easier to evaluate the photo if it were bigger.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Round Tuit View Post
    You have a beautiful capture of the duck flying into the early, or late, light. I am not sure that you need all that water behind it. It would also be easier to evaluate the photo if it were bigger.
    It would be boring if we all took photos and edited them in the same way. Thank You for the interest You show and I am proud of it. I hope it will not diminish. Thank You again.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Radu Dinu View Post
    It would be boring if we all took photos and edited them in the same way. Thank You for the interest You show and I am proud of it. I hope it will not diminish. Thank You again.
    I agree about that we don't want all the images looking the same, but in general, leaving room in front of a moving subject results in a stronger image, as Andre suggests.

    Second comment - I have no issue with you adding a wordmark to your image, but here it is bright and part of the image composition. Generally that is not something that works well either. If you "sign" your works, make sure that the signature does not distract (small and subtle is all that is needed).

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    Re: The flight

    Quote Originally Posted by Manfred M View Post
    I agree about that we don't want all the images looking the same, but in general, leaving room in front of a moving subject results in a stronger image, as Andre suggests.

    Second comment - I have no issue with you adding a wordmark to your image, but here it is bright and part of the image composition. Generally that is not something that works well either. If you "sign" your works, make sure that the signature does not distract (small and subtle is all that is needed).
    My suggestion was not to put more space in front of the bird but rather to reduce the space behind. Having the bird close to the right edge create a strong impression that it is leaving the scene. If it were close to the left edge, the impression would be that it is flying into the scene. Two different stories.

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