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15th February 2026, 03:10 PM
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Concentration
Pianist Hsinyu Kwan pictured just before her master class with Pascal Denis, Professeur au Conservatoire National Supérieur de Musique de Paris.
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15th February 2026, 03:48 PM
#2
Re: Concentration
Very nice portrait, with effective lighting.
My only suggestions would be to crop from the to a little over the top of the chair and burn the bright wall around it so that it is not a distraction. It's brighter than much of her face, and the eye is drawn to contrast.
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15th February 2026, 03:55 PM
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Moderator
Re: Concentration
+1 to Dan's comment. While I was at it, I would also consider burning down that bright area on the right hand side of the chair back.
Overall a strong image, but taking care of those distractions would improve the impact of the image.
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16th February 2026, 12:20 PM
#4
Re: Concentration
Thanks for the feedback.
In fact I had already done both of those things (the wall was in full sun), but perhaps not enough...
Cheers
David
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