I had to look at this image for a few minutes before it made sense to me.
When the alignment finally clicks, it changes how you read the scene and (hopefully) gives you a small moment of surprise. Thanks for your comment, Geoff.
I see what you are trying to do here and the concept works. I do find the bright background distracting, which works against your main subjects. I wonder if creating a silhouette might be worth considering/
I see what you are trying to do here, and the concept works. I do find the bright background distracting, which works against your main subjects. I wonder if creating a silhouette might be worth considering/ ]
Hi Manfred. I really like this as a graphic interpretation — it has a strong visual punch. I prefer to keep it as an observed visual moment. Much appreciated.