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    The Struggle to survive....

    Captured in East Zion, Utah.
    A stunted ponderosa pine rooted in a crack on an expanse of fissured and fractured Navajo sandstone.
    It is amazing how plants and trees can take root and survive in such an environment.
    C&C welcome.

    The Struggle to survive....Lone Pine by Len Reeves, on Flickr

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    Re: The Struggle to survive....

    I wonder if you have a little bit too much foreground? Would a 4 x 5 ratio have more impact?

    Otherwise, this looks good to me.

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    Re: The Struggle to survive....

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    I wonder if you have a little bit too much foreground? Would a 4 x 5 ratio have more impact?

    Otherwise, this looks good to me.
    I agree with Geoff. I would also consider adding a touch of contrast.

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    Re: The Struggle to survive....

    My thanks to Geoff and Andre.
    Appreciate your taking the time to offer suggestions.....

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    Re: The Struggle to survive....

    I agree with Andre and Geoff. I think this has a lot of potential, but it needs tweaking. The way it is now is out of balance--too much negative space below the tree. In addition to contrast, I would add texture. The sandstone would be much more interesting that way.

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    Re: The Struggle to survive....

    Thanks Dan, appreciate your input. Will revisit the image along the lines suggested....

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