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12th April 2025, 08:24 AM
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Persistence of vision 2

Another from my recent shoot with dancer Gaëlle Lorthe
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13th April 2025, 02:15 PM
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Re: Persistence of vision 2
Another very striking image.
I think I might go for a tighter crop, removing just a bit on the left and more on the top. It looks a bit unbalanced to me as is.
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13th April 2025, 09:50 PM
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Re: Persistence of vision 2
The vibrant garments in motion contrast fascinatingly with the serious expression, suggesting cultural richness and personal depth.
David, a remarkable capture indeed.
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15th April 2025, 01:40 PM
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Re: Persistence of vision 2
I agree with Dan. There are some faint verticals in the background (?curtains) and cropping slightly on the left - at the first full length vertical should do it. Looking at the bottom, there is just a suggestion of a dark stage and cropping the top to match that may work.
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15th April 2025, 07:02 PM
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Re: Persistence of vision 2
Thanks chaps, I agree that it's a bit unbalanced but I struggled to do better. Re-cropping to 3/2 works well, though I've left the left alone - the curtains dont bother me. Advice much appreciated.
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