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    Persistence of vision 2

    Persistence of vision 2

    Another from my recent shoot with dancer Gaëlle Lorthe

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    Re: Persistence of vision 2

    Another very striking image.

    I think I might go for a tighter crop, removing just a bit on the left and more on the top. It looks a bit unbalanced to me as is.

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    The vibrant garments in motion contrast fascinatingly with the serious expression, suggesting cultural richness and personal depth.

    David, a remarkable capture indeed.

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    Re: Persistence of vision 2

    I agree with Dan. There are some faint verticals in the background (?curtains) and cropping slightly on the left - at the first full length vertical should do it. Looking at the bottom, there is just a suggestion of a dark stage and cropping the top to match that may work.

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    Re: Persistence of vision 2

    Thanks chaps, I agree that it's a bit unbalanced but I struggled to do better. Re-cropping to 3/2 works well, though I've left the left alone - the curtains dont bother me. Advice much appreciated.

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