Good attempt Dave... IMO pulling up the shadows in the foreground will benefit this image.
Hope you don't mind me doing this.
Did a quick one minute edit in Photoshop, nothing more than contrast adjustments, slight vibrance layer and a simple sharpen for web.
It brings out a little detail in the foreground and makes the palm tree pop out a lot more. You could improve more than my one minute edit
Thank you I do like that.
Dave.
Nice capture, the silhouette works.
I liked it as such; Mitchell's improvement has worked....the red roof matches the colour scheme; thank God it was not blue![]()