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22nd June 2016, 02:18 PM
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New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
Hi guys,
I'm new to this forum and new to photography. Really interested in learning what people think of my photos. All comments welcome!
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22nd June 2016, 08:19 PM
#2
Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
Looks good to me, Nick. The two outside figures are looking towards the centre which helps to keep the group together.
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22nd June 2016, 08:46 PM
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Moderator
Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
Welcome Nick,
I agree with Geoff, the muted tones of the surrounding buildings vs the clothing also helps lift the subjects from the background.
If I have one thought, it would be that ideally I'd like to have seen more/all of the foreground woman, she feels 'chopped off' to me.
I see you shot this with a Nikon D3300 at 34mm; 1/125s, f/7.1 and iso 100.
All the best, Dave
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22nd June 2016, 10:16 PM
#4
Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
Nick, this is a nice photo. I agree with Dave about the woman in the foreground. Keep up the good work.
Bruce
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22nd June 2016, 11:18 PM
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Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
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23rd June 2016, 01:11 AM
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Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
Thanks a lot for the kind comments. It means a lot to me to finally have more experienced photographers giving feedback.
Best,
Nick
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24th June 2016, 12:39 AM
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Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
I agree with previous comments, Nick, but just wonder if it doesn't also need a slight rotation to the left.
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24th June 2016, 06:12 AM
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Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
Totally Greg. Here it is looking straight.
Unfortunately the women in the foreground was chopped off when taking the picture so can't experiment with leaving her in
Best
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24th June 2016, 08:53 PM
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Moderator
Re: New Beginnings (Welcome C&C)
Hi again Nick,
I think I prefer the slightly different composition of the second version, even in respect of the foreground woman.
Cheers, Dave
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