
Originally Posted by
Dave Humphries
Hi Bryan,
Not sure if you were looking for critique on each specifically, but you did mention 'Practising composition' and 'trying' things in a couple of places.
#1 - gives me a good impression of the scale of a landscape alien to an Englishman who has never visited an area like that
#2 - as does this one, although I concur with Manfred's query on the horizon (in fact I also wondered whether #1 was level, looking at the most distant horizon on left)
#3 - works very well, as you intended
#4 - got any more of the interesting tree?
I ask because; for me, it is too centred in the composition, but I fear that merely panning/cropping slightly to left or right with this shot wouldn't be ideal, due to the positional relationships between the foreground tree and the background rock outcrops. I think a slightly different grouping would be required to give a good composition with the tree on (say) the left or right 'thirds' line and some of those background elements.
#5 - also works well, my only slight query, because of the less helpful sun angle, is whether a subtle adjustment to Local Contrast and/or sharpening might give it just a bit more 'pop'.
#6 - I like the darker foreground, can I ask; is that natural, or a gradient filter in PP? This is another where I'd be tempted to increase Local Contrast, but it may be that what you have reproduced is more accurate to what you experienced.
I hope those thoughts are helpful the next time you combine hobbies.
All the best, Dave