Nice focus on the eyes.
Paul - while I like the pose, I'm not so sure about the post-processing. The image has a very muddy look to it, and that really takes away from the shot. I'm pretty sure that the white's of your daughter's eyes are white; not gray.
Hi PaulI like the image but IMO those borders don't suit the photo and they distract from your daughter's face.
I really like this image but I would have to agree with Manfred.
Dave