Divided - C&C are most welcome

[Tejal]

Here in this picture, I have tried to use my reflection on the glass and the legs of the person standing on the other side of the board, with a though of doing something different .

Kindly share your C&C for the same.

Regards,

Tejal

IMG_9847 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

Hi Tejal, It is different but I think it works without the extra feet; in fact it works perfectly without the feet and I don't think a full silhouette is necessary. There is enough detail to suggest what the left hand figure is doing; the mystery is in determining what the man is doing, how close is he to the shooter, and what does the writing have to do with the imagery. I suppose the feet and floor pattern offers something to the viewer; perhaps it is an image within itself. Nicely done.

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal, It is different but I think it works without the extra feet; in fact it works perfectly without the feet and I don't think a full silhouette is necessary. There is enough detail to suggest what the left hand figure is doing; the mystery is in determining what the man is doing, how close is he to the shooter, and what does the writing have to do with the imagery. I suppose the feet and floor pattern offers something to the viewer; perhaps it is an image within itself. Nicely done.

thanks John for your valuable input. Something like this ? I dont know whether i have shared this image before or not.

IMG_6408 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

thanks John for your valuable input. Something like this ? I dont know whether i have shared this image before or not.

IMG_6408 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

Hi Tejal,

Nicely composed, a shame about the white crease as it totally blocks you from our view.

[bnnrcn]

Hi Tejal, I like the idea I agree with John about the extra legs though. IMO the shoes and patterns on the ground distract from the reflections. I would try cropping the legs just below the knees to see how it works.

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal,

Nicely composed, a shame about the white crease as it totally blocks you from our view.

Oh.... I purposely stood there . That means this is also not a correct shot.

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal, I like the idea I agree with John about the extra legs though. IMO the shoes and patterns on the ground distract from the reflections. I would try cropping the legs just below the knees to see how it works.

Thanks Binnur for your feedback. It seems i will have to work on different crops.

[Kaye Leggett]

I would go for a square frame in agreeing with the others that the extra legs are superfluous

[jcuknz]

This is the shot I see with the reflection increased 150% sideways aand 170% vertically and repositioned to mate better with ther shot.

Not quite right but I am late for an appointment ....

edit Back on-line [after Shadowman's comment] with time to play basically alining the legs to the shoes better and a crop off the left to put the photographer on the vertical left third instead of central.

[Tejal]

I would go for a square frame in agreeing with the others that the extra legs are superfluous

Thanks for your valuable input.

[Tejal]

This is the shot I see with the reflection increased 150% sideways aand 170% vertically and repositioned to mate better with ther shot.

Not quite right but I am late for an appointment ....

edit Back on-line [after Shadowman's comment] with time to play basically alining the legs to the shoes better and a crop off the left to put the photographer on the vertical left third instead of central.

Oh this is looking very nice. Thanks .

[IzzieK]

Very late to this post too but John did a very good edit here...I really like it very much -- different.

Just as a matter of curiosity, are you a girl or a man...you do not have to answer this...

[Tejal]

Very late to this post too but John did a very good edit here...I really like it very much -- different.

Just as a matter of curiosity, are you a girl or a man...you do not have to answer this...

Yes, he did a nice job. Even I liked it very much . I am a girl (BTW )

[IzzieK]

Yes, he did a nice job. Even I liked it very much . I am a girl (BTW )

Well! you must be a beautiful girl...!!! Now I can stop thinking of you as a guy...that helps.

[Tejal]

Well! you must be a beautiful girl...!!! Now I can stop thinking of you as a guy...that helps.

he he he....

[bnnrcn]

May be you should add an avatar to your profile Tejal. When I joined to CinC , some members thought that I was male and I solved the problem by adding an avatar to my profile

Yes, he did a nice job. Even I liked it very much . I am a girl (BTW )

[Shadowman]

May be you should add an avatar to your profile Tejal. When I joined to CinC , some members thought that I was male and I solved the problem by adding an avatar to my profile

I wasn't sure either at first but I just Googled the name.

[Tejal]

May be you should add an avatar to your profile Tejal. When I joined to CinC , some members thought that I was male and I solved the problem by adding an avatar to my profile

He he he he...

[Tejal]

I wasn't sure either at first but I just Googled the name.

Lol.... Tejal is a typical Indian (Gujarati) female name.

[Shadowman]

Lol.... Tejal is a typical Indian (Gujarati) female name.

Some countries have unique spelllings to distinguish between the sexes (I believe in Latin countries female given names usually end with an "a" and males with an "o", are there any particular distinctions with your region?