Diptych

[Shadowman]

[bnnrcn]

This is a very interesting image John. I was looking for the rest of the image when I first opened the thread

[DEAN01]

Very nice, John.

[Shadowman]

This is a very interesting image John. I was looking for the rest of the image when I first opened the thread

Hi Binnur,

Thanks for commenting.

[Shadowman]

Very nice, John.

Thanks Dean.

[IzzieK]

Very creative interpretation of a (Tram??) window??? I must say that the out-o-bounds hand/finger of the little girl on the right is a give away there...I like the way you think....

[gregj1763]

A very clever shot and crop John

[Chrisclick]

Another good title and, a good shot.

[Shadowman]

Very creative interpretation of a (Tram??) window??? I must say that the out-o-bounds hand/finger of the little girl on the right is a give away there...I like the way you think....

Hi Izzie,

Thanks for the comments.

[Shadowman]

A very clever shot and crop John

Thanks Greg.

[Shadowman]

Another good title and, a good shot.

Thanks Chris.

[RBSinTo]

John,
I think the concept is an excellent one, but in my opinion the execution leaves a bit to be desired.
Because the background is brighter than the subjects inside the tram, my eye is constantly pulled from them.
I don't know if this was taken locally, but if so, I'd suggest returning on a less contrasty day when the exposure difference was not as great.
An overcast day would also let you use a larger aperture, decreasing the depth of field and lessening the impact of the busy and unattractive background.
Robert

[Shadowman]

John,
I think the concept is an excellent one, but in my opinion the execution leaves a bit to be desired.
Because the background is brighter than the subjects inside the tram, my eye is constantly pulled from them.
I don't know if this was taken locally, but if so, I'd suggest returning on a less contrasty day when the exposure difference was not as great.
An overcast day would also let you use a larger aperture, decreasing the depth of field and lessening the impact of the busy and unattractive background.
Robert

Hi Robert,

With the season of good weather coming to an end I may not have many more opportunities and the candid models will definitely not be the same. Thanks for comments and critique.