
Originally Posted by
Max von MeiselMaus
I am not too fussed about the different light temperatures in there. The only places where they jar slightly are on the sloping ceiling on the lhs and the strip of carpet by the staircase. However, I wouldn't have seen those if I hadn't gone looking.
The only thing that struck me was that it is a little top-heavy. I am guessing that you wanted to include that doorway on the landing, which would be important if you were producing a sales picture. It shows what the layout of the area is. However, this means that the foreground doesn't have as much space. With a wider shot you could have included the doorway, some more of the staircase and fitted some more foreground in there. If you could have sacrificed the top door, you could have shot lower and cut out that slanted ceiling, which has been causing problems with light temperature and shadow.
Being REALLY nit-picky, and this from someone who does still life so is used to moving things a fraction of an inch, taking a shot, then moving them back again, I might have looked to de-clutter that left hand corner, behind the sofa. I might have moved that bench to somewhere it wouldn't be seen, to clear the space behind the lamp. I would also have moved the bowl on the rear table to the right slightly, to clear most of it from the chair, perhaps leaving a slight overlap to show depth. I would also have moved it forward so that its top edge doesn't line up with the dark window sill. But, as I say, that is becoming still life picky.
But I like the oblique lines. It gives it interest and leads the eye around the space. Looking at how many features you managed to fit in, it also looks as though you found the best spot from which to take that shot.