City House of Zrenjanin, Serbia - HDR

[emils]

This is one of the first HDR photographs that I have taken. I have tried to play a little bit with shadows and highlights in Lightroom, but I did not want to change it a lot.


by emilex from Fliiby

Once I have upload the photograph in my computer, I have noticed that bright light on right side form the nearby light. I should move forward few steps but I have not noticed that during shooting...

What do you think about this photo? What I could do to improve it a bit more?

Thanks

[Shadowman]

Nice effort, I would clone out the stray bits of light in upper right corner and some near the sides. Also, perhaps bring a bit more detail out of the shadows of the roof so that the yellow lights don't look like they are floating.

[Rebel]

Nice effort, I would clone out the stray bits of light in upper right corner and some near the sides. Also, perhaps bring a bit more detail out of the shadows of the roof so that the yellow lights don't look like they are floating.

+1 to John's comments

[Geoff F]

Yes, definitely fix that light problem; also on the roof dome on the left side, there is a tiny bit of light just showing. I would clone that as well.

[Barnwell]

Nice photo. I would try darkening the ground a little so the building stands out more. The ground is bright.

[IzzieK]

+1 to John's comments.

[emils]

Thank you all very much for your replies. I will try to play around with my raw file and try to fix those issues that you have said