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    Sculpture - C & C are welcome

    Kindly review and share your suggestion which could have made my below click better. I have tried two rotations. Please guide which is better.

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    Sculpture -  C & C are welcomeIMG_1515-R by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Sculpture -  C & C are welcomeIMG_1515-L by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: Sculpture - C & C are welcome

    Second one for me Tejal Bending posture is more noticeable in #2 . I think the highlights on the face needs reducing a bit .

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    Both are a bit tight to the frame edges but possibly you had to exclude something.

    The highlights are fractionally brighter in the second image. Is that a little too much in places?

    Not really sure about the camera angle which seems somewhat unnatural to me. But without seeing a much wider shot I can't really comment on what else might have been possible. Focus is sharp and plenty of depth with it.

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    Re: Sculpture - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Second one for me Tejal Bending posture is more noticeable in #2 . I think the highlights on the face needs reducing a bit .
    thanks Binnur for your input. I have tried to reduce the highlights as suggested by you, which is as below.

    Sculpture -  C & C are welcomeIMG_1515_1 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: Sculpture - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    Both are a bit tight to the frame edges but possibly you had to exclude something.

    The highlights are fractionally brighter in the second image. Is that a little too much in places?

    Not really sure about the camera angle which seems somewhat unnatural to me. But without seeing a much wider shot I can't really comment on what else might have been possible. Focus is sharp and plenty of depth with it.
    Thanks for your inputs. Actually some other sculptures were there also there on sides. I have tried to avoid those. Here is the SOOC shot.

    Sculpture -  C & C are welcomeIMG_1515 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Recuded highlights looks good in your edit Tejal, but I have to tell you that your SOOC is a good image and I wouldn't crop it so tightly if it was mine. I would crop some from both sides but I would leave the whole statue in the frame

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    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Recuded highlights looks good in your edit Tejal, but I have to tell you that your SOOC is a good image and I wouldn't crop it so tightly if it was mine. I would crop some from both sides but I would leave the whole statue in the frame
    I Agree with you, Binnur....here is the revised one :

    Sculpture -  C & C are welcomeIMG_1515-R by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: Sculpture - C & C are welcome

    This one looks nice too , I think I would keep both versions if the image was mine. IMO you need to open the shadows in this version a bit because you lost some details which are visible on the cropped B&W version( post #4)

    PS. The crop looks a bit tight at the bottom , I can see in the original that you have some more space at the bottom. Adding it to the image might help.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tejal View Post
    I Agree with you, Binnur....here is the revised one :

    Sculpture -  C & C are welcomeIMG_1515-R by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: Sculpture - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    This one looks nice too , I think I would keep both versions if the image was mine. IMO you need to open the shadows in this version a bit because you lost some details which are visible on the cropped B&W version( post #4)

    PS. The crop looks a bit tight at the bottom , I can see in the original that you have some more space at the bottom. Adding it to the image might help.
    Thanks Binnur for pointing out such an important things. I will again try to make it better considering your inputs

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