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9th March 2015, 01:43 AM
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9th March 2015, 03:21 AM
#2
Re: Niagara (Summer)
Flowers and butterfly very nice, city through trees not so much; too much framing.
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9th March 2015, 03:18 PM
#3
Re: Niagara (Summer)
My best is the butterfly shot
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9th March 2015, 04:02 PM
#4
Re: Niagara (Summer)
Some good ideas here; but for me, #1 isn't working because there is just too much out of focus dark areas in the foreground. I wonder about having a different crop or a merge of two focus points so the foreground is also in focus; but somehow, I don't think that particular angle is going to work well, but there is certainly potential for the general view if you can avoid the out of focus bits and have a better sky.
#2 is another good idea which isn't quite there as far as I am concerned. The general principle of a good sharp foreground gradually fading into the distance is a sound idea but I find there is too much out of focus area which is overwhelming the intended subject.
The butterfly is fine although I would try to slightly tone down that bright spot in the background behind the wing trailing edge.
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9th March 2015, 04:26 PM
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Re: Niagara (Summer)
I have to agree about number 1. The framing is a tad distracting. Number 2 and 3 are really good though in my opinion.
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10th March 2015, 12:48 AM
#6
Re: Niagara (Summer)
Thanks for the comments everyone! I wasn't too sure about #1 myself. If I get back to that spot I might try for a better crop and make sure I get the buildings sharp.
Geoff, here's an update for the Butterfly. Hopefully the background is slightly less distracting.
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10th March 2015, 07:04 PM
#7
Re: Niagara (Summer)
Yes, that is a lot better.
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