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8th February 2015, 06:04 PM #1
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Robin at Wisley Gardens
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8th February 2015, 06:57 PM #2
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Re: Robin at Wisley Gardens
Nicely done.
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8th February 2015, 09:27 PM #3Moderator
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Re: Robin at Wisley Gardens
Hi Steve,
Nice capture again and there are some great 'leading lines' taking the eye to the subject from the lower two corners.
The one element of the shot that I feel does not contribute to the composition is the bright sprig in the top right corner. If you want to see what I mean, you can hold a thumb over the sprig between your eye and the monitor.
That could (fairly) easily be cloned out - IF you are happy doing that - some people are not and that's fine - perhaps it could be 'toned down' in PP, or by application of a vignette.
Hope that's helpful, Dave
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8th February 2015, 09:38 PM #4
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Re: Robin at Wisley Gardens
Nice Capture Steve. I agree with Dave on the top right corner but I also believe that you don't need all of the bottom part of the image. The very lowest part doesn't contribute much to the image. It might be worth trying a slight crop.
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