Industry by night

[joebranko]

This shot was taken an hour after sunset. As there was no appreciable colour in the sky I opted for mono as this, in my mind, represented the industrial feeling. C&C appreciated.

[Donald]

My first reaction was to think there is too much water in the foreground. If you were to crop it from the bottom to make it say a 3:1 ratio pano, (is it 2.5:1 at the moment?) I think that might balance it a bit better. Just a thought.

[joebranko]

My first reaction was to think there is too much water in the foreground. If you were to crop it from the bottom to make it say a 3:1 ratio pano, (is it 2.5:1 at the moment?) I think that might balance it a bit better. Just a thought.

. Thank you. I think it does. Here is the new cropped version:- Is this enough? Or should I loose some sky too?

[Donald]

Now, that I like. I think that's made a significant difference.

[Geoff F]

An alternative would be to crop the sides and concentrate more on the reflection in the water.

Either way, getting closer to the 'action' will help.