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    another orchid version

    Took some care to get it straight on and balanced...do I like it...not sure???

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    Re: another orchid version

    Quote Originally Posted by chauncey View Post
    Took some care to get it straight on and balanced...do I like it...not sure???
    Ok William, I'll be totally honest and give you my opinion.

    It's far too symmetrical and clinical looking, it's a coloured 'pattern' not a beautiful flower

    As for the stalk, it looks like a piece of black rubber cable

    Orchids, although I have not attempted them that often, from what I experienced were not the easiest flower to photograph unless they were done in a group or selective compositions right in close.

    I could of course just said lovely colours

    Grahame

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    Re: another orchid version

    clinical looking
    That's the word that I was looking for...clinical. The honesty is appreciated.

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    Re: another orchid version

    I prefer this background to the black or very light ones you used previously. This background may work a little better it was a bit darker or had a darkening vignette added. The flower is a bit of a bullseye resulting in a static image in spite of the diagonal stem. Cropping a bit off the top and right may help. Technically well done.

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    Re: another orchid version

    Maybe, perhaps...a tighter crop is in order, down to 9".

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    Re: another orchid version

    I like it, it's almost like it's gazing at the viewer.

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    Re: another orchid version

    Chauncey,

    I have to agree with Grahame about the full-flower image.

    The crop is interesting. I've done a few of this sort. It's interesting lighting; it looks like you have some backlighting as well as some front light. The green background seems OK in the crop. However, IMHO, for images of this sort, you need a lot more DOF. Assuming you are using a macro lens, I would get as close as possible to minimize damage from cropping, shoot at perhaps f/8-f/11, and then stack. For stacking, I would guess that three or four images would do it, but you can monitor this on the LCD as you move the focus in.

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    Re: another orchid version

    Superb

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