I reckon a pair of scissors or something stronger can be handy on shots like that as the leaf across will detract.
Otherwise fine from my point of view. Making water drops look spectacular might mainly be a lighting effect. Something I have never tried to do.
John
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I think the leaf adds to the image and would certainly work well with this setup if shot from a lower angle. It is almost intruding upon the Lily and that makes for a specific theme.