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    "Severn River"

    Severn River, or what used to be a river before the drought hit.

    "Severn River"

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Very impressive river-scape...

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Very nice composition and very nice colours EdwinI don't know what it is in the sand in the foreground ,but it is a bit distracting..It might be a good idea to work on it in PP.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Very nice, serene setting.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Nice panoramic, with good colour, tone and contrast. Would agree that the wooden post in the foreground needs removing.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Handsome landscape. Nice tones and corresponding feel.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    If you click on the image for a full view, you'll see that the object in the foreground is an old fence post Binnur.
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    Last edited by Edwin Harvey; 8th March 2014 at 01:41 AM.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Pano with fence post erased.

    "Severn River"

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Love the composition and the contrasting colors. The large version seems a bit soft.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Nice view. The dark dirt part is little bit too big for me.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Hi Edwin,

    That was a great edit... removing the post has really improved the overall image. Sometimes the littlest things can be distracting. If you had kept it in the image, aligning it on one of the third rules may have helped.

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    [QUOTE=Edwin Harvey;391600]Pano with fence post erased.

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Nice capture Edwin!

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    Re: "Severn River"

    Edwin,

    I like this, I really like it.

    Agreed with Dan. The “softness” might be due to resizing. The “Southern” way of sharpening will do it. You really want to have an image like this to be tack sharp.

    This might as well have been shot in the Free State (a province in SA).

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    Re: "Severn River"

    It is much better without the fence post Edwin

    Quote Originally Posted by Edwin Harvey View Post
    Pano with fence post erased.

    "Severn River"

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