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2nd February 2014, 04:15 PM
#1
Show them a light and they'll follow you anywhere.....
Have I got too much foreground in this composition? All thoughts and comments regarding the image are appreciated in the ongoing effort for improvement.
Andrew
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2nd February 2014, 06:46 PM
#2
Re: Show them a light and they'll follow you anywhere.....
I would try cropping it a little bit from the bottom,did you use a very wide angle to take this photo Andrew?As far as I know ,ultra wide angles give bigger foregrounds and may not be suitable for every scene.
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2nd February 2014, 06:56 PM
#3
Re: Show them a light and they'll follow you anywhere.....
This! is a good project for composition and cropping. The shot has a lot of potentials. Crop a little to the left, crop a big lot at the bottom...space at the right is OK...try it.
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2nd February 2014, 07:07 PM
#4
Re: Show them a light and they'll follow you anywhere.....
I wouldn't change that foreground fence, Andrew, unless you make a substantial crop.
For me, I need to see some depth to that fence. In fact I do wonder about actually having a little more of it. The fence is what draws you into the far distance.
If you want to try something different, how about a crop from the right side, and a different size ratio?
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2nd February 2014, 08:05 PM
#5
Re: Show them a light and they'll follow you anywhere.....
I like the fence and the way it leads my eye to the lighthouse, the windblown feel and the gorgeous colours. I like this image cropped off of the right side, almost midway between the two fence posts... But I'm still learning too, and that is just a version that appeals to me.
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2nd February 2014, 08:09 PM
#6
Re: Show them a light and they'll follow you anywhere.....
The foreground fence is partially needed to lead the eyes to the shoreline and lighthouse referenced in your title, but a close crop, zoom in, or getting closer to the subject would be more beneficial to your viewers.
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2nd February 2014, 09:16 PM
#7
Re: Show them a light and they'll follow you anywhere.....
Reach for the sky..... Assuming you cannot gain any more elevation you could try taking a few shots with the camera held above your head. When I do it I have a high failure rate regarding composition but I usually manage to get one that is about right.
A bit more elevation will have the fence a bit lower and not such a block to the eye entering the photo. Often a unblocked reasonably direct visual path helps a scene. Also the gap of water between the shore and lighthouse/beacon should increase and make the lighthouse/beacon a bit more dominant.
Certainly a very attractive setting with the contrasting tones and snow. Excellent exposure to not blow out snow. In fact it on my monitor it could even be a fraction brighter.
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