Here we go again...but before I post two new versions I want to say that this thread has opened my eyes to new PP techniques and new ways to compose/frame an image and I want to send out a sincere mahalo (thank you) to everyone who gave me some 'food for thought'!
I know that I will be going out to this area again and will be able to see it differently in some respects next time as a result of this thread. I also know that I can use what I have learned through this thread for other scenes as well
On to the edits...I went back to my first image SOOC to see if it would work in a 16:9 ratio per Frank's suggestion but I was unable to remove all of the tall foreground plant which then became a distraction with only a bit showing at the bottom of the frame. But, I will show you the square crop per Mike's suggestion which I think really enhanced the hint of a trail in the left middle ground that helps lead the eye to the background mountain. I'm not sure which I like better as in my mind they are now very different images.
Mike's next suggestion to tone down the reflection in the second revised image was a PP challenge for me...it may sound easy but it took me a while and this is what I came up with:
If you aren't sick of this scene yet and have something to add to the thread feel free to do so...