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    Divine Glimpse

    Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

    I really liked the sun beam falling between the trees and i tried to make a vortex sort of composition by placing the sun in the center.

    Please share your views about the composition and the image.

    In the post processing i have tried to add contrast in the image by darkening the shadows and lightening the highlights a bit.

    Thank You

    Divine Glimpse

    PS: Branch removed after some valuable suggestions. Thanks
    Divine Glimpse
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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Only thing missing is an alien spacecraft.

    What is that line crossing the lower half? Is that an electrical line? I would consider rotating the image to see if it lessens the visibility of the line or enhances it.

    Nice image.

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Hi Raj,In my opinion too,the branch John mentioned spoils the picture but I don't know what can be done about it..except for the branch I like your shot..

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Only thing missing is an alien spacecraft.

    What is that line crossing the lower half? Is that an electrical line? I would consider rotating the image to see if it lessens the visibility of the line or enhances it.

    Nice image.
    haha alient spacecraft.

    Thanks for your kind review and the suggestion. It was a branch. Infact i have removed it instead of rotating the image. Here is the version without the branch.

    Divine Glimpse

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    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Hi Raj,In my opinion too,the branch John mentioned spoils the picture but I don't know what can be done about it..except for the branch I like your shot..
    Thanks for your valuable review I have removed the branch as suggested and updated the thread with the new image.

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Quote Originally Posted by fotugraphy View Post
    haha alient spacecraft.

    Thanks for your kind review and the suggestion. It was a branch. Infact i have removed it instead of rotating the image. Here is the version without the branch.

    Divine Glimpse
    Much better.

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Much better.
    Thanks a lot for the suggestion

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    It looks much better and it is a nice shot Raj:-)

    Quote Originally Posted by fotugraphy View Post
    Thanks for your valuable review I have removed the branch as suggested and updated the thread with the new image.

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Very good.

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Very nice.
    Add the Spacecraft!

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    It looks much better and it is a nice shot Raj:-)
    Thanks a lot for the suggestion.

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Quote Originally Posted by Bobobird View Post
    Very good.
    Thank you for the review and the appreciation

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    Re: Divine Glimpse

    Quote Originally Posted by Kris V View Post
    Very nice.
    Add the Spacecraft!
    Thank you for the review I'm waiting for the right time so that i can get these beams again and next time i will take a spacecraft model and add it in real

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