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    f/22, ISO 800, 4s, 22mm

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    Quite a novel presentation; i think the purple leaf needs a bit more brightening; very well done

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wavelength View Post
    Quite a novel presentation; i think the purple leaf needs a bit more brightening; very well done
    Thanks Nandakumar.

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    I added a bit of light to the veins.

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    Doubtless, better

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    Re: Unnatural Nature

    Gorgeous image!

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    Very nicely done, John. I like the lighting on these shots.

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    Agree, it is nicely done John!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Christina S View Post
    Gorgeous image!
    Thanks Christina.

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    Quote Originally Posted by unmerited View Post
    Very nicely done, John. I like the lighting on these shots.

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    Thanks Sergio.

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    Quote Originally Posted by chauncey View Post
    Agree, it is nicely done John!
    Thanks Chauncey.

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    John,

    Novel idea and I like the lighting. It may be an interesting group to put closer together and see what you can do.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stagecoach View Post
    John,

    Novel idea and I like the lighting. It may be an interesting group to put closer together and see what you can do.

    Grahame
    Thanks for the comments Grahame. It is a work in progress, always open to new ideas.

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    John;

    My first sense upon viewing this was that the items appeared to be floating downward in a breeze which I think is very intriguing and has the potential for a somewhat surrealistic series. The positioning of the purple leaf on the right take a bit of the 'float' away from the image for me and I wonder if a more horizontal or side view would increase that effect.

    This is not generally my cup of tea but it is something that I have been trying to wrap my head around and experiment with myself so I enjoyed viewing this and would like to hear more about what your vision was when you created the image. I'm picturing a floating/falling tea set/accesories (ala Alice in Wonderland) as I write but would have no idea how to shoot something like that

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    Very intriguing photo and i agree with Shane oodles of potential for a series which you are doubtless on too, it being a work in progress - looking forward to seeing some more.

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    Agree, John.

    This image takes on the quality of an abstract still life with a tactile feel. Everything you have put in can be associated something you touch. You have picked an excellent background. I like how we all have stopped by and said "Hmmm......l wonder..." as we viewed your image.

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    Re: Unnatural Nature

    Quote Originally Posted by ShaneS View Post
    John;

    My first sense upon viewing this was that the items appeared to be floating downward in a breeze which I think is very intriguing and has the potential for a somewhat surrealistic series. The positioning of the purple leaf on the right take a bit of the 'float' away from the image for me and I wonder if a more horizontal or side view would increase that effect.

    This is not generally my cup of tea but it is something that I have been trying to wrap my head around and experiment with myself so I enjoyed viewing this and would like to hear more about what your vision was when you created the image. I'm picturing a floating/falling tea set/accesories (ala Alice in Wonderland) as I write but would have no idea how to shoot something like that
    Hi Shane,

    Thanks for the comments. I tried a few horizontal shots and also a floating leaf. Looks fine, but the timing was off on the leaf drop and was more of a blur. Everything is still setup so I will experiment more with the arrangement.

    My thoughts during setup, I used a light tent with white panels, black backdrop, was allowing enough light to expose the items; while controlling the light spill through the sides. I spaced the three buds to give a 3-D effect, each bud is about the same size, and placed the two leaves at elevated positions to increase the effect. Nandakumar suggested I add a bit more light to the purple leaf, so I decided to retouch the veins only.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kaye leggett View Post
    Very intriguing photo and i agree with Shane oodles of potential for a series which you are doubtless on too, it being a work in progress - looking forward to seeing some more.
    Thanks Kaye. Probably my first still life that actually worked out. They usually look just ...still.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marie Hass View Post
    Agree, John.

    This image takes on the quality of an abstract still life with a tactile feel. Everything you have put in can be associated something you touch. You have picked an excellent background. I like how we all have stopped by and said "Hmmm......l wonder..." as we viewed your image.

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    Marie,

    Thanks for the kind comments. Winter time usually limits my chances for honing my photographic skills. A week ago the ground was covered in snow so I took a hike along with my camera, which I rarely do; and captured the scene in the link below. Three days later rain washed away all the snow, the ground was clear and I spotted these buds and took them home with me. Another storm blew into the city, I was pretty much tired of trekking through the snow, and after perusing the forum got inspired to try my hand at another still life. Hopefully the inspiration I get from the Cambridge members will carry me through the winter.

    Buds

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    Even though this isn't the sort of style that I like, it impresses me more than any of your other photos at least that come to mind. I agree with the others that this could be one of a series of images.

    Just a couple of suggestions you have probably already thought of: Consider anchoring at least one of the objects to the frame for a different effect that you may or may not like. Strongly consider attending to the black background; it's got just enough tonal variation that it seems to be a mistake that you either intended everything to be total black and missed or that you intended to have some tonal variation but didn't use enough of it.

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