Brian,
Light is very Harsh, that makes one withdraw eyes from the image; i think you can smooth light falling on the subject by using some translucent screen
The shape of the leaf is wonderful![]()
For me, they are tending to get lost amongst the foliage. I would slightly crop the bottom and right side.
I carry my flash smoother outer in my back pocket, my stick in my left hand and my camera in my right. Not sure where i would carry a translucent screen nor how I could put it up without scaring the bugs. Sunlight in the tropics can be harsh and as these pants grow in half shade there is bound to be extreme shadows.
I could darken things down but then details would be lost?
B