fire at will!

[JimG]

from my weekend trip downtown, i hope you guys enjoy!

C&C are welcome and appreciated!



FL: 24mm
F/:10
S:30"
I:100

[Geoff F]

Poor old Will, everybody seems to fire at him!

Not sure about that tiny solitary star in the top right corner; but otherwise excellent.

[Mike Buckley]

This very nice photo gets even better as it's viewed at a larger and larger size.

Consider getting rid of all six stars, not just the brightest one. Unless you like the noise in the sky as a colorful, artistic look, you could easily get rid of it without causing any damage to the rest of the photo.

[kdoc856]

Lovely shot. Initially, I thought I liked the stars till I jumped up to lightbox and the star trails became quite evident. I'd lean toward removal- nothing crucial there.

[Donald]

Gorgeous. If mine, I'd take out the stars (but it's not, so it's not my call).

The light on the cannon is wonderful. How was it lit?

[JimG]

Hey guys thanks for all the feedback. Ill remove the stars tomorrow after work and repost the edit.

Donald, the light was fron an adjacent building. Ill post the uncropped photo youll see clearly where its from!

[JimG]

Here's the edit without stars, it does look better thanks


here's the original Donald, all the light was coming from that building on the side.

[Daisy Mae]

As the others have said...lovely work!

[Wavelength]

Nice for sure