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Hi all .... I wonder what comments this image would draw..
It is for me one of those typical vistas that catches my eye as I move around and about, I guess it can only be described as a still life and I allowed myself the editing freedom to explore some richer tones in the RGB..
I think it works but I would be most grateful for feedback and views...
Regards
Frank
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4th February 2013, 01:47 PM #1
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4th February 2013, 06:22 PM #2
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I wonder, Frank, if there is a little too much on the left and too little on the right.
Possibly, I would consider a slight crop of the right side and bottom.
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4th February 2013, 06:28 PM #3
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I love these kind of shots Frank...I think that tonally the dishtowel doesn't quite work but I like the idea.
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5th February 2013, 05:57 AM #4
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Thank you Geoff F for taking the time to comment and I can see what your suggesting, the above composition is perhaps a little awkward making the eye 'bounce' around ....
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5th February 2013, 06:00 AM #5
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Many thanks Daisy good of you to take the time ... and your view on the colours is very welcome ....
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