Walking home this shot captured my attention.
Sadly the dark spot has not been completely eliminated,
and sadly the camera was set to very small photo files, which I discovered when we got home!~!
C&C welcome, to help me with future shots.
Suggestion was to crop it and take out the jet trail.
What do you think?
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Thread: Stobrec - as the sun goes down
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31st January 2013, 07:51 PM #1
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Stobrec - as the sun goes down
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31st January 2013, 08:50 PM #2
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Re: Stobrec - as the sun goes down
I think I would try cropping a fraction from the top and left side.
And remove the aircraft trail.
Otherwise, it looks OK to me.
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31st January 2013, 09:37 PM #3
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Re: Stobrec - as the sun goes down
Good point about the cropping.
And I left the aircraft trail in there to see what others thought.
I was more concerned about getting the dark spot out.
Done, tell me what you think, an improvement or not, I think so.
BUT, when I look at the first one, I am immediately drawn to the skyscape.
In the second that does not happen the same.Last edited by rawill; 31st January 2013 at 10:07 PM.
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