Morning Light

[dje]

This is something quite different for me and I'm not sure whether it works or not. I'd appreciate your views, good or bad - thanks.

Dave

PS : This shot was taken with my new Canon G15 compact.

[enaiman]

I can see why you took this picture; the pseudo-spiral pattern on the vase is very eye-catching. I return to that point so often to realise that for me it is the main subject.
I like the way you have included a part of the table because it adds depth.
The vase content - while interesting in itself - can't make me focus there long enough unfortunately.

Personally, I feel that the picture needed to include the whole content, to provide a sort of frame. Unfortunately the missing top does not work for me.

Interesting subject, perfect execution (as always) only the composition could be better in my opinion.

[dje]

Thanks for your comments Eugen - all very valid. I dont think I'm on a winner with this one !

Dave

[Mike Buckley]

The missing part of the top also doesn't work for me. To change the subject entirely, you could make a really nice image photographing only the shadow on the wall.

[dje]

Thanks for the idea Mike -worth having a look at.

Dave