Can I suggest that you have a read of HELP THREAD: How can I post images here?. This will guide you to get your images embedded into your post rather than them just being very small thumbnail attachments. That will help people respond to your request for comment. If the help thread doesn't help, then please do call out.
On these, I think you have positioned the bird well in each frame, but there are some comments about exposure that folks may want to try and help with if they can see the images more clearly.