This was taken at a Chinese dragon festival in Auckland, a great show. comments welcome.
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11th October 2012, 09:55 AM #1
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Tea break,
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11th October 2012, 02:49 PM #2
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Re: Tea break,
Very interesting subject and very colourful.But the person on the right has been cut in a odd manner.You could took it from a few steps back to include the 2nd man or to totally exclude him.The background trees are too prominent and so distracting.You could use larger aperture to make the depth of field shallower.
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11th October 2012, 04:32 PM #3
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Re: Tea break,
Hi John, this image is colourful....its well exposed..... but what are you trying to convey to us other than a record of your trip? why do you find the image interesting? do you have any specific feeling about it yourself? how do you think you could improve it?
My own feelings about it is that its badly composed and the shooting angle gives no interest to me as a viewer, i think your shooting angle is to high.
sorry
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