Originally Posted by
Loose Canon
Hi Darren!
Nice capture and I can tell it has great meaning to you.
I like the way you have composed/cropped your candid, sir.
Candids, to me at least, are super fun to shoot. I feel that in some ways to snag that great image while things are just happening with no interference from the photographer has its own challenges. Not the least of which is that the photographer really kind of has to keep his/her eyes open, anticipate, be a little sneaky, and a little luck never hurts! I have to wonder if you could have ever posed this shot and been able to grab this with all the emotion of this beautiful moment. I doubt I could (though it wouldn’t keep me from trying!).
A couple of suggestions I might have tried in addition. For your consideration…
First I might try lowering the exposure by around just enough bring back the slightly blown areas on the subjects. Mostly Alex’s shirt, but I would see if that might help the overall skin tones a bit.
I might just try some basic blemish removal to compliment your Female subject. I might try some skin softening for her, but I would have an eye toward keeping it minimal. If I didn’t like it, I might trash it, but your subjects are certainly in harsh lighting. No worries, thus is the nature of the candid to me!
Then maybe see about burning the subject’s skin and Alex's awesome red hair with a largish brush and a low opacity (maybe 8% or so) to taste. Making broad passes over the skin.
I would ask myself if I really wanted to mess with removing the bra strap. I would probably try with the caveat that if I didn’t do it convincingly, I would bag that idea. I wouldn’t consider it a big deal, but its there.
I would definitely try a nice vignette for some separation and targeting. This I would most likely do no matter what else I did. And maybe a bit of sharpening of the subjects.
Then, regardless of whatever else I did, I would print it in an obscenely large size and hang it!
I would then proceed to enjoy it every day for the rest of my Life!