Fog Bank over the Sea

[Ollokot]

Hi Folks,
I would value your comments and suggestions here, I am in two minds whether to darken the sky or not, or is the shot worth wondering about.
Best Wishes Pat

[Donald]

I am in two minds whether to darken the sky or not,

My first reaction was to think about lightening the foreground, just a bit - the sand and the rocks, including those rocks behind the behind and beside the pool. I'd worry that darkening the sky made it terribly sombre.

[Ollokot]

Thanks Donald, I'll try that and see how it looks.
Pat

[MilT0s]

It definitely worth Pat but I 'd love to see a larger version of your image. I think it is too small to evaluate properly.

[Bobobird]

A very nice shot and with a bit of work a wall hanger.

[Ollokot]

Thank you all for your comments. I have made some adjustments and posted at a larger size but don't know if I am on the right track, is it better or worse. Best Wishes Pat

[Donald]

... but don't know if I am on the right track,...

I think it is. I think that now gives us an image we can look at and take in information rather than straining to make out the detail.

[Mike Buckley]

Great suggestion by Donald and great implementation of it by you. Thanks also for the larger size. It's such a nice image that it deserves being shown in the larger size.